Dear Mr Simms
I am writing to apply for a place in this college to travel to Australia and to study an English course.
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I have been working very hard and I will be good on this course in Sydney and I am very confident that I will get a certificate for this course.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Tuesday, June 23, 2009
Mr Simms 4
Dear Mr.Simms,
I am writing to apply for the scholarship in Australia, which you advertised on the noticeboard in our college.
I am interested in studying English aboard. First of all, I have studied English at college for 1 year and I found it interesting and very helpful. Also, in the ordinary life and especially in my profession because I would like to work as a travel agent. In this job I will meet the people of different nationalities and from all backgrounds and I think, it will be important to understand the different accents. Finally, I think , it would be a great chance to meet new people and to learn about the different culture and lifestyle.
I would like to have the opportunity to get the scholarschip in Sydney to find some new experiences for the future .
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
I am writing to apply for the scholarship in Australia, which you advertised on the noticeboard in our college.
I am interested in studying English aboard. First of all, I have studied English at college for 1 year and I found it interesting and very helpful. Also, in the ordinary life and especially in my profession because I would like to work as a travel agent. In this job I will meet the people of different nationalities and from all backgrounds and I think, it will be important to understand the different accents. Finally, I think , it would be a great chance to meet new people and to learn about the different culture and lifestyle.
I would like to have the opportunity to get the scholarschip in Sydney to find some new experiences for the future .
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Mr Simms 3
Dear Mr Simms
I am writing to apply for the scholarship to study English in Australia.
I would like to improve my skills in English Language, meet
new people with different back grounds which would be very helpful for my skills in my future course. Learning more is my top priority.
I learn quickly. I already speak two Languages . I have been the best in my class for two consecutive years. I also finished my maths course last summer and started an IT program course
this year. I have been the top of my IT class and my teacher is very happy with my work.
I hope to hear from you soon
Yours sincerely
I am writing to apply for the scholarship to study English in Australia.
I would like to improve my skills in English Language, meet
new people with different back grounds which would be very helpful for my skills in my future course. Learning more is my top priority.
I learn quickly. I already speak two Languages . I have been the best in my class for two consecutive years. I also finished my maths course last summer and started an IT program course
this year. I have been the top of my IT class and my teacher is very happy with my work.
I hope to hear from you soon
Yours sincerely
Mr Simms 2
Dear Mr Simms,
I am writing to apply for the scholaship which will be in Australia in two weeks time.
Firstly, I am interested in this trip because there will be an English Course for three months that will be an opportunity for me to study English in another country .
And also it is a great chance to meet other people , other cultures and to make friends. Going in Australia will help my English a lot because I will be in contact with people speaking with an accent that will open my mind and listening to people with a different accent.
I would really like to make this journey, it will be a great experience for me as have never been there before.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
xxxx xxxx
I am writing to apply for the scholaship which will be in Australia in two weeks time.
Firstly, I am interested in this trip because there will be an English Course for three months that will be an opportunity for me to study English in another country .
And also it is a great chance to meet other people , other cultures and to make friends. Going in Australia will help my English a lot because I will be in contact with people speaking with an accent that will open my mind and listening to people with a different accent.
I would really like to make this journey, it will be a great experience for me as have never been there before.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
xxxx xxxx
Mr Simms 1
Dear Mr. Simms
I would like to be considered for the scholarship advertised on the notice board at City College Plymouth.
I am very interested in having a scholarship this year, because I have studied English more than six months and really enjoy that. Secondly I feel I am one of the best students in class. I am always involved in school tasks and I follow teacher’s instructions. Learning English is at the moment one of the most important aims for me.
I am very open to new experiences, besides travelling is my passion. Moreover I like meeting new people and visiting new countries. That boosts my life. I have excellent communications skills. In addition, I am interested in using my English skills in a new environment.
I would like the opportunity to develop my English Skills in Australia as part of the scholarship. I feel I could represent my college very well.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
I would like to be considered for the scholarship advertised on the notice board at City College Plymouth.
I am very interested in having a scholarship this year, because I have studied English more than six months and really enjoy that. Secondly I feel I am one of the best students in class. I am always involved in school tasks and I follow teacher’s instructions. Learning English is at the moment one of the most important aims for me.
I am very open to new experiences, besides travelling is my passion. Moreover I like meeting new people and visiting new countries. That boosts my life. I have excellent communications skills. In addition, I am interested in using my English skills in a new environment.
I would like the opportunity to develop my English Skills in Australia as part of the scholarship. I feel I could represent my college very well.
I am looking forward to hear from you.
Yours sincerely
Messauoda 6
Hi Messaouda.
How are you? It’s nice to hear from you. I am very happy to hear that you will come to Britain next year.. If you’re English is not very good it is difficult. I think when you first come here it is quite difficult to understand our language. But don’t worry it’s fine.
When I first came here and it was very difficult to understand English and then I went to school and learned English. So now I am speaking English very well.
In my college where I am studying this is a very nice college to learn English. Our teachers are very interesting they are very helpful and all students are passing their exams. So it’s a very nice college and you should join.
Please consider it good advice and follow it.
Good luck with this and don’t hesitate to contact me for further information.
Your friend
How are you? It’s nice to hear from you. I am very happy to hear that you will come to Britain next year.. If you’re English is not very good it is difficult. I think when you first come here it is quite difficult to understand our language. But don’t worry it’s fine.
When I first came here and it was very difficult to understand English and then I went to school and learned English. So now I am speaking English very well.
In my college where I am studying this is a very nice college to learn English. Our teachers are very interesting they are very helpful and all students are passing their exams. So it’s a very nice college and you should join.
Please consider it good advice and follow it.
Good luck with this and don’t hesitate to contact me for further information.
Your friend
Messauoda 5
Hi Messaouda
How are you? Its really nice to hear from you and nice you are
coming to Brittan so you will contact the college as soon as possible when you are arrive here to get a space.
You have to study ESOL to learn English
because the life is too difficult in the UK if you do not speak English. For example you can’t by anything or you can’t go to the post office so that’s why you have to study English.
l remember when l
came to UK. l couldn’t speak and l couldn’t go anywhere. But l was studying at ESOL course
to learn English so now my English is very good and l am continuing to study. l am trying to make a good practice of my English all of the time and l am talking to English people very much to learn new words and to have a much more skill about the English
language .
So l hope when you are arrive here you can get a space at
college and learn English very soon.
See you soon
With love
How are you? Its really nice to hear from you and nice you are
coming to Brittan so you will contact the college as soon as possible when you are arrive here to get a space.
You have to study ESOL to learn English
because the life is too difficult in the UK if you do not speak English. For example you can’t by anything or you can’t go to the post office so that’s why you have to study English.
l remember when l
came to UK. l couldn’t speak and l couldn’t go anywhere. But l was studying at ESOL course
to learn English so now my English is very good and l am continuing to study. l am trying to make a good practice of my English all of the time and l am talking to English people very much to learn new words and to have a much more skill about the English
language .
So l hope when you are arrive here you can get a space at
college and learn English very soon.
See you soon
With love
Messauoda 4
Hi Messaouda
It’s fantastic that you are coming to Britain.
I’m not sure that my English is as good as you think, but is not so bad. I’m living here over two years. After coming to England I’ve learned a lot a home. Next I’ve joined English class at college. I can develop my skills in written and spoken English as well. Every half term I have to pass an exam which is good to verify some progress or not.
Because I’m living here I’ve got the opportunity to practice my English every day: in shops, on the bus, in offices, in my son’s school etc. Sometimes it isn’t easy when people cannot understand you and opposite, but you cannot give up. Now, after two years I’m feeling more confident than before.
Let me know when you plan to come here because I can book your place in the English class in advance.
I’d better get going, as I’m late for work.
Write soon what dates you are coming.
Take care
It’s fantastic that you are coming to Britain.
I’m not sure that my English is as good as you think, but is not so bad. I’m living here over two years. After coming to England I’ve learned a lot a home. Next I’ve joined English class at college. I can develop my skills in written and spoken English as well. Every half term I have to pass an exam which is good to verify some progress or not.
Because I’m living here I’ve got the opportunity to practice my English every day: in shops, on the bus, in offices, in my son’s school etc. Sometimes it isn’t easy when people cannot understand you and opposite, but you cannot give up. Now, after two years I’m feeling more confident than before.
Let me know when you plan to come here because I can book your place in the English class in advance.
I’d better get going, as I’m late for work.
Write soon what dates you are coming.
Take care
Messauoda 3
Hi Messaouda
It’s nice to know you are coming to Britain next year.
Don’t worry about a lot, learning English its much easier when you live here, because you need to speak and understand everyday what the people say and every day you learn more. You can go to school to improve your English . I think the most difficult is
the writing. I went to school four days a week and my teacher was very helpful and you can get free nursery for your
children .
I hope to see you soon.
Love
It’s nice to know you are coming to Britain next year.
Don’t worry about a lot, learning English its much easier when you live here, because you need to speak and understand everyday what the people say and every day you learn more. You can go to school to improve your English . I think the most difficult is
the writing. I went to school four days a week and my teacher was very helpful and you can get free nursery for your
children .
I hope to see you soon.
Love
Messauoda 2
Hi Messauoda
I’m really glad to hear from you. I’m so happy that you are coming to Britain I can’t wait.
You asked me how I learned English. So, it wasn’t too difficult, I found a nice college in my city which I heard about from friends of mine. I went there to ask about English courses for me and next week I started my English lessons.
When I started my course I was thinking that English was very difficult especially English grammar. When you are writing you’ve got much more time to think, but in speaking I’ve done lots of grammar mistakes. In our language articles like a, an, the do not exist so it’s very difficult to remember about that. But don’t worry not everything is so difficult. When you are practicing English you stop thinking about grammar it’s starting to be automatic. You use words and sentences that you heard from others or found in the book. And every day you start to be more confident speaking with other people, what makes you feel really proud of yourself.
I hope that you will be enjoying your English lessons. I think that you can start learning English now. If you want I can send you some websites which you can use every day to learn some words and little bit of grammar.
Please let me now how your lessons are going. I would look for some course for you in my college. I can’t wait to see you here in England.
Have a nice day, write soon
I’m really glad to hear from you. I’m so happy that you are coming to Britain I can’t wait.
You asked me how I learned English. So, it wasn’t too difficult, I found a nice college in my city which I heard about from friends of mine. I went there to ask about English courses for me and next week I started my English lessons.
When I started my course I was thinking that English was very difficult especially English grammar. When you are writing you’ve got much more time to think, but in speaking I’ve done lots of grammar mistakes. In our language articles like a, an, the do not exist so it’s very difficult to remember about that. But don’t worry not everything is so difficult. When you are practicing English you stop thinking about grammar it’s starting to be automatic. You use words and sentences that you heard from others or found in the book. And every day you start to be more confident speaking with other people, what makes you feel really proud of yourself.
I hope that you will be enjoying your English lessons. I think that you can start learning English now. If you want I can send you some websites which you can use every day to learn some words and little bit of grammar.
Please let me now how your lessons are going. I would look for some course for you in my college. I can’t wait to see you here in England.
Have a nice day, write soon
Messauoda 1
Hello Messaouda ,
When I came to Britain I couldn’t speak and write and read
any thing , I started learning English . First
time it was too hard for me , because every thing was different with my language I found it very difficult .
I kept practicing English at college and my home I
always looked for new words ,and when I didn’t know what was the meaning of any word I
asked my teacher , hopefully my teacher would help me and answer all of my
questions. He told me what was good to do
to speak fluent English .
At the moment my English is not perfect and I think I will
never get perfect , because of spelling and I think it is not only me.
Most people have a problem with spelling ,I think the hardest thing to learn in English language is spelling .
You will probably learn English better then me ,coz you already know how to
speak English ,you will not have a lot of problems like I had .
I hope you will learn English very quickly .
See you soon ,,,
your mate
When I came to Britain I couldn’t speak and write and read
any thing , I started learning English . First
time it was too hard for me , because every thing was different with my language I found it very difficult .
I kept practicing English at college and my home I
always looked for new words ,and when I didn’t know what was the meaning of any word I
asked my teacher , hopefully my teacher would help me and answer all of my
questions. He told me what was good to do
to speak fluent English .
At the moment my English is not perfect and I think I will
never get perfect , because of spelling and I think it is not only me.
Most people have a problem with spelling ,I think the hardest thing to learn in English language is spelling .
You will probably learn English better then me ,coz you already know how to
speak English ,you will not have a lot of problems like I had .
I hope you will learn English very quickly .
See you soon ,,,
your mate
Friday, June 19, 2009
Diman's first draft
Dear Mr Simms
I am writing to apply for the scholarship which is advertised.
I think its good chance to every student this scholarship and learn anew skills I feel confidence if I learn anew accent cause student agood caredifecate.And its amazing things if you know about adiferend culture for example amuseam or a church or how can people getting a job or how you can get abetter life and the government helping people
I am writing to apply for the scholarship which is advertised.
I think its good chance to every student this scholarship and learn anew skills I feel confidence if I learn anew accent cause student agood caredifecate.And its amazing things if you know about adiferend culture for example amuseam or a church or how can people getting a job or how you can get abetter life and the government helping people
READING AND WRITING EXAMS
Everyone in the class will be taking these exams
THURSDAY 2ND JULY
9.30 Reading
11.00 Writing
Kings Road Main Hall
Please be there at least 15 minutes before
THURSDAY 2ND JULY
9.30 Reading
11.00 Writing
Kings Road Main Hall
Please be there at least 15 minutes before
Friday 19th June 2009
Hi
Today we will be doing several things.
1. Please answer the tasks (writng exam practice)that are scheduled for today. Please email these tasks to me and we shall have a look at correcting them next week.
2. We will also look at some of your written work, that you completed last week.
Good luck and I will see you soon
Jason
Today we will be doing several things.
1. Please answer the tasks (writng exam practice)that are scheduled for today. Please email these tasks to me and we shall have a look at correcting them next week.
2. We will also look at some of your written work, that you completed last week.
Good luck and I will see you soon
Jason
Friday 19th June 2009
Task
You have just read the advertisement which appears on the noticeboard in your college.
THIS YEAR, the college is offering a travel and study scholarship to all students who have studied at school for 6 months or more. You will travel to Australia, and study English for three months in Sydney, all expenses paid.
Please apply in writing, saying why you deserve this scholarship, to Nicholas Simms within two weeks.
write 120-180 words
You have just read the advertisement which appears on the noticeboard in your college.
THIS YEAR, the college is offering a travel and study scholarship to all students who have studied at school for 6 months or more. You will travel to Australia, and study English for three months in Sydney, all expenses paid.
Please apply in writing, saying why you deserve this scholarship, to Nicholas Simms within two weeks.
write 120-180 words
Friday 19th June 2009
You receive an email from your friend Messaouda.
Hi!
I am coming to Britain next year but my English is not very good. Your English is very
good. How did you learn English? Can you tell me what you did? Was it difficult?
Best wishes
Messaouda
Write an email to Messaouda. Tell her how you learned English, what was difficult and what was not
difficult.
Write about 120 words.
Hi!
I am coming to Britain next year but my English is not very good. Your English is very
good. How did you learn English? Can you tell me what you did? Was it difficult?
Best wishes
Messaouda
Write an email to Messaouda. Tell her how you learned English, what was difficult and what was not
difficult.
Write about 120 words.
Friday, June 12, 2009
Mark scheme for last reading paper
http://www.cambridgeesol.org/assets/pdf/resources/sfl/e3_readingmark_mar05.pdf
Web resources Useful ESOL websites
Try a few out and then post a comment on the blog.
http://www.dfes.gov.uk/readwriteplus/LearningMaterialsESOL
The ESOL curriculum online
http://www.niace.org.uk/projects/esolcitizenship/Home-Eng.htm
Citizenship materials, which are used in class.
http://www.flo-joe.co.uk/fce/students/writing/makeover/archive.htm
Model answers for various writing activities (letter, report, article etc.)
http://www.britishcouncil.org/learnenglish-central-news-current.htm?mtklink=central-learnenglish-portal-popular-offers
Good site for various days of the year….eg overpopulation day 11th July. Lots of reading!
- has thousands of activities to help you study.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/videonation/
Great site if you want to use a video resource. You can choose the video of the day or go to a region of the UK (fantastic if you want to vary accents). A variety of topics from homelessness to graffiti to relationships. Click on the archives for a quick search.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/
Great site, my favourites are News English (words in the news) and Watch and listen, both these are good for high level learners. There are areas for lower level learners too, check out the flatmates.
www.real-english.com/reo/index-int1.htm
Selection of short videos at various levels, includes subtitled videos
http://cla.univ-fcomte.fr/english/dictations/realenglish/realindex.htm
Similar videos but with gaps for students to write in what was said
http://a4esl.org/
Interesting site, although it is not very colourful! Bi-lingual quizzes, even in Kurdish, Somali and Lingala. Has some basic grammar and vocab quizzes, which are good for independent study. My favourite is the Daily English Show, which changes every day, nice for some basic video and a Kiwi accent!
http://wwwedu.ge.ch/cptic/prospective/projets/anglais/exercises/welcome.html
Basic website but useful if you want to find some language (grammar, vocab) exercises on the net rather than paper based.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm
A huge variety of quizzes. For all you Yankophobes, stay away from the phonology section!
http://www.learnenglishfeelgood.com/grammarexercises.html
Loads of Quizzes
http://www2.essex.ac.uk/jobshop/help/examples.shtm
Great site for anyone doing CVs and covering letters
http://www.btinternet.com/~ted.power/first.html
Gapped texts for lower level learners. Hint - always choose the interactive version for use on the net. (to do this you need to click on the chapter then click on the interactive version)
www.insideout.net
is good for topical e-lessons. Teachers need to register in order to receive material.
www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish
provides all sorts of things that teachers or students can access, including quizzes
www.englishclub.com (lots of skills and exercises and a chat room)
www.longman-elt.com/dictionaries/webdictionary.html
www.eslcafe.com/discussion/ (discussion room for different subjects)
www.englishpage.com/
www.peevish.co.uk/slang/
http://esl.about.com (lots of links)
htttp://www.write101.com/too.htm (writing tips)
http://www.grammarbook.com/
http://www.english-at-home.com/
Websites to accompany coursebooks, eg English File: www.oup.com/elt/englishfile
British Council http://www.britishcouncil.org
BBC Learning http://bbc.co.uk/learning
BBC Skillswise http://www.bbc.co.uk/skillswise
http://www.dfes.gov.uk/readwriteplus/LearningMaterialsESOL
The ESOL curriculum online
http://www.niace.org.uk/projects/esolcitizenship/Home-Eng.htm
Citizenship materials, which are used in class.
http://www.flo-joe.co.uk/fce/students/writing/makeover/archive.htm
Model answers for various writing activities (letter, report, article etc.)
http://www.britishcouncil.org/learnenglish-central-news-current.htm?mtklink=central-learnenglish-portal-popular-offers
Good site for various days of the year….eg overpopulation day 11th July. Lots of reading!
- has thousands of activities to help you study.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/videonation/
Great site if you want to use a video resource. You can choose the video of the day or go to a region of the UK (fantastic if you want to vary accents). A variety of topics from homelessness to graffiti to relationships. Click on the archives for a quick search.
http://www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish/
Great site, my favourites are News English (words in the news) and Watch and listen, both these are good for high level learners. There are areas for lower level learners too, check out the flatmates.
www.real-english.com/reo/index-int1.htm
Selection of short videos at various levels, includes subtitled videos
http://cla.univ-fcomte.fr/english/dictations/realenglish/realindex.htm
Similar videos but with gaps for students to write in what was said
http://a4esl.org/
Interesting site, although it is not very colourful! Bi-lingual quizzes, even in Kurdish, Somali and Lingala. Has some basic grammar and vocab quizzes, which are good for independent study. My favourite is the Daily English Show, which changes every day, nice for some basic video and a Kiwi accent!
http://wwwedu.ge.ch/cptic/prospective/projets/anglais/exercises/welcome.html
Basic website but useful if you want to find some language (grammar, vocab) exercises on the net rather than paper based.
http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/quiz_list.htm
A huge variety of quizzes. For all you Yankophobes, stay away from the phonology section!
http://www.learnenglishfeelgood.com/grammarexercises.html
Loads of Quizzes
http://www2.essex.ac.uk/jobshop/help/examples.shtm
Great site for anyone doing CVs and covering letters
http://www.btinternet.com/~ted.power/first.html
Gapped texts for lower level learners. Hint - always choose the interactive version for use on the net. (to do this you need to click on the chapter then click on the interactive version)
www.insideout.net
is good for topical e-lessons. Teachers need to register in order to receive material.
www.bbc.co.uk/worldservice/learningenglish
provides all sorts of things that teachers or students can access, including quizzes
www.englishclub.com (lots of skills and exercises and a chat room)
www.longman-elt.com/dictionaries/webdictionary.html
www.eslcafe.com/discussion/ (discussion room for different subjects)
www.englishpage.com/
www.peevish.co.uk/slang/
http://esl.about.com (lots of links)
htttp://www.write101.com/too.htm (writing tips)
http://www.grammarbook.com/
http://www.english-at-home.com/
Websites to accompany coursebooks, eg English File: www.oup.com/elt/englishfile
British Council http://www.britishcouncil.org
BBC Learning http://bbc.co.uk/learning
BBC Skillswise http://www.bbc.co.uk/skillswise
Friday 12th June 2009
Today's task is to write an account.
Write and account about how you came to this country.
Explain how you made the decision to come, what you knew about the country,
who you came with, how you travelled here and how you felt about making the journey.
Write between 120-180 words
email the writing to my email address
jsearing@cityplym.ac.uk
Write and account about how you came to this country.
Explain how you made the decision to come, what you knew about the country,
who you came with, how you travelled here and how you felt about making the journey.
Write between 120-180 words
email the writing to my email address
jsearing@cityplym.ac.uk
Friday, May 15, 2009
European Elections MOnday 18th May 2009
Think about the information about European Elections
Research the information on the political parties.
What questions would you like to ask these members?
Think about some of the following:
Animal Rights
Your rights
Education
Health
International Trade
Transport
Write down your questions....
Research the information on the political parties.
What questions would you like to ask these members?
Think about some of the following:
Animal Rights
Your rights
Education
Health
International Trade
Transport
Write down your questions....
Report task 2
Question
A magazine is carrying out research into facilities for young people.
We are putting together a list of facilities for young people in your area in a number of different categories, including:
Sports centres
Museums and art galleries
Clubs and societies for young people
Please send us a short report about one of the above, in which you give
1) a brief description of the facility
2) your views
3) any recommendations
Write your report for the magazine (around 120-180 words)
A magazine is carrying out research into facilities for young people.
We are putting together a list of facilities for young people in your area in a number of different categories, including:
Sports centres
Museums and art galleries
Clubs and societies for young people
Please send us a short report about one of the above, in which you give
1) a brief description of the facility
2) your views
3) any recommendations
Write your report for the magazine (around 120-180 words)
Thursday, May 14, 2009
SAMPLE REPORT
ESE3
FALL SALIOU
MOHAMAD HASSAN
Introduction
The purpose of this report is
to examine sport and IT facilities of the college.
Sport facilities
First of all to have access in sport and CAT activities in the college you will have to pay the
20 pounds membership to do all activities that you want to do in the
college including the gym. This membership will
guarantee you one year of practice. There are a lot of activities which include:
basketball football kayaking and fitness for the body.
3-I.T
Secondly the IT facilities of the college are very good. There is a library which consists of 64
computers on which you can stay longer than 3 hours. In addition there is a study centre with about 35 computers.
4-Conclusion
I would recommend that you to pay for the membership card as soon as possible to have a free access to the CAT activities and to use the library as much as possible.
FALL SALIOU
MOHAMAD HASSAN
Introduction
The purpose of this report is
to examine sport and IT facilities of the college.
Sport facilities
First of all to have access in sport and CAT activities in the college you will have to pay the
20 pounds membership to do all activities that you want to do in the
college including the gym. This membership will
guarantee you one year of practice. There are a lot of activities which include:
basketball football kayaking and fitness for the body.
3-I.T
Secondly the IT facilities of the college are very good. There is a library which consists of 64
computers on which you can stay longer than 3 hours. In addition there is a study centre with about 35 computers.
4-Conclusion
I would recommend that you to pay for the membership card as soon as possible to have a free access to the CAT activities and to use the library as much as possible.
SAMPLE REPORT
INTRODUCTION
The purpose of this report is to explain the different facilities offered by the college to the students.
FACILITIES
We made a team of 5 students and checked all the marketing and we found :
- Firstly the college offered courses which may develop skills like IT, Business formation, Engineering ,and English, aswell as other courses.
- In addition the college has support for disabled people in order for them to gain a qualification .
- Finally we found out that the college has also a leisure group called
CAT for all students even foreign students,which tries to encourage students to take part in sport, activities, dance etc.
CONCLUSION
The result shows that the college has many facilities like leisure , developing skills and learning and those facilities are very useful for the students .
RECOMMENDATIONS
We therefore recommend the college to keep these facilities and to add some more if possible.
The purpose of this report is to explain the different facilities offered by the college to the students.
FACILITIES
We made a team of 5 students and checked all the marketing and we found :
- Firstly the college offered courses which may develop skills like IT, Business formation, Engineering ,and English, aswell as other courses.
- In addition the college has support for disabled people in order for them to gain a qualification .
- Finally we found out that the college has also a leisure group called
CAT for all students even foreign students,which tries to encourage students to take part in sport, activities, dance etc.
CONCLUSION
The result shows that the college has many facilities like leisure , developing skills and learning and those facilities are very useful for the students .
RECOMMENDATIONS
We therefore recommend the college to keep these facilities and to add some more if possible.
SAMPLE REPORT
INTRODUCTION
The aim of this report is to summarize the best and worst aspects of the school.
THE PROBLEMS (THE WORST)
First of all, as there were twenty one of us in the class, we thought the class is not big enough for all of us. Secondly we need more time for the lesson and finally the college buses need to be more frequent.
POSITIVE FINDINGS (THE BEST)
We were pleased with ours teachers, as they were friendly and helpful. In the school restaurant we can buy a big meal for a small price. Secondly the library is organised and we can find all kinds of books, magazines and documentary tapes that we need. In addition the school provides child care for everyone who wants to enjoy the course at school and that means the young parents go back to school again.
SUMMARY
We therefore recommend that reducing the amount of students in the class and that the school provides more school buses. Otherwise we were satisfied with the school.
The aim of this report is to summarize the best and worst aspects of the school.
THE PROBLEMS (THE WORST)
First of all, as there were twenty one of us in the class, we thought the class is not big enough for all of us. Secondly we need more time for the lesson and finally the college buses need to be more frequent.
POSITIVE FINDINGS (THE BEST)
We were pleased with ours teachers, as they were friendly and helpful. In the school restaurant we can buy a big meal for a small price. Secondly the library is organised and we can find all kinds of books, magazines and documentary tapes that we need. In addition the school provides child care for everyone who wants to enjoy the course at school and that means the young parents go back to school again.
SUMMARY
We therefore recommend that reducing the amount of students in the class and that the school provides more school buses. Otherwise we were satisfied with the school.
SAMPLE REPORT
●INTRODUCTION●
The aim of this report is to describe the College’s facilities.
●GOOD FACILITIES●
The Student Union can be very good for students with less financial possibilities. You can obtain low prices for different activities, like pool and you can bring your friends to play video games.You will have to pay the £20 membership to have a free access to these and other activities, like rock climbing, kayaking or football.
The library has got lots of computers (in fact about 64), books, CDs, DVDs and many useful things. There you can find the peace you need. It is a nice place for studying.
The college has a lot of shops where you can buy snacks, drinks, sandwiches you can even buy pens and notebooks.
●BAD FACILITIES●
The gym has old machines, which needs to be updated.
In the canteen the food is very good, except some people who eat only food from their countries.
●CONCLUSION●
In summary, the college has a good range of facilities, which are helpful for all students. In the future we would recommend investing in the gym and canteen.
The aim of this report is to describe the College’s facilities.
●GOOD FACILITIES●
The Student Union can be very good for students with less financial possibilities. You can obtain low prices for different activities, like pool and you can bring your friends to play video games.You will have to pay the £20 membership to have a free access to these and other activities, like rock climbing, kayaking or football.
The library has got lots of computers (in fact about 64), books, CDs, DVDs and many useful things. There you can find the peace you need. It is a nice place for studying.
The college has a lot of shops where you can buy snacks, drinks, sandwiches you can even buy pens and notebooks.
●BAD FACILITIES●
The gym has old machines, which needs to be updated.
In the canteen the food is very good, except some people who eat only food from their countries.
●CONCLUSION●
In summary, the college has a good range of facilities, which are helpful for all students. In the future we would recommend investing in the gym and canteen.
SAMPLE REPORT
Name: Magdalena Zycinska, Agata Wodecka.
School: City College Plymouth.
INTRODUCTION
The purpose of this report is to show what kind of facilities our
college has and show how we would like to improve it through our suggestions.
LEARNING FACILITIES
First of all, we would like to mention about the good furnishings in each
class. When it comes to computers, there are some almost in each
classroom. If you need to use a computer after a lesson you can go to the
library and there is access to the website as well.
In our college we have qualified and friendly teachers who are very
helpful and polite.
LEISURE FACILITIES
We have College Activity Team which you can join
for only £20 per year. Some of the activities include rock climbing, kayaking and drama.
You will also find a restaurant in the college where you can
eat lunch and talk with friends. AT the entrance you will also find the florist.
CONCLUSION
To sum up, my only suggestion would be doing something with the bus,
which is always late or full. However we would recommend our college as great
place to learn good things and spend a nice time
School: City College Plymouth.
INTRODUCTION
The purpose of this report is to show what kind of facilities our
college has and show how we would like to improve it through our suggestions.
LEARNING FACILITIES
First of all, we would like to mention about the good furnishings in each
class. When it comes to computers, there are some almost in each
classroom. If you need to use a computer after a lesson you can go to the
library and there is access to the website as well.
In our college we have qualified and friendly teachers who are very
helpful and polite.
LEISURE FACILITIES
We have College Activity Team which you can join
for only £20 per year. Some of the activities include rock climbing, kayaking and drama.
You will also find a restaurant in the college where you can
eat lunch and talk with friends. AT the entrance you will also find the florist.
CONCLUSION
To sum up, my only suggestion would be doing something with the bus,
which is always late or full. However we would recommend our college as great
place to learn good things and spend a nice time
Friday, May 8, 2009
Report task
You have been asked to write a report on the facilities the college has.
These can include leisure, IT, learning, catering and anything else that may be useful.
Write between 150-180 words
Use the following resources to help you
http://www.flo-joe.co.uk/fce/students/writing/makeover/archive.htm
(look at model answers in the report section)
http://www.dcsf.gov.uk/readwriteplus/bank/esol%20e3%20unit%205.pdf
(page 10 of this document we looked at in class)
These can include leisure, IT, learning, catering and anything else that may be useful.
Write between 150-180 words
Use the following resources to help you
http://www.flo-joe.co.uk/fce/students/writing/makeover/archive.htm
(look at model answers in the report section)
http://www.dcsf.gov.uk/readwriteplus/bank/esol%20e3%20unit%205.pdf
(page 10 of this document we looked at in class)
Tuesday, May 5, 2009
Report Task
Writing Paper: Part 2
Task type: Report
Question
Last year a new sport and leisure centre opened in your home town. You have recently received the following letter from the manager of the centre.
I am writing to all members of the Active Leisure Club to thank you for your custom over the last year. We want to make the facilities even better this year! Please send a short report to us, telling us what you think are the best and worst aspects of the club. We also want to hear your suggestions for new facilities...
Write your report to the manager of the club (around 120-180 words).
Task type: Report
Question
Last year a new sport and leisure centre opened in your home town. You have recently received the following letter from the manager of the centre.
I am writing to all members of the Active Leisure Club to thank you for your custom over the last year. We want to make the facilities even better this year! Please send a short report to us, telling us what you think are the best and worst aspects of the club. We also want to hear your suggestions for new facilities...
Write your report to the manager of the club (around 120-180 words).
Friday, April 24, 2009
Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart was born in January 1756 in Salzburg in Austria.
His musical talent was showed from his earliest childhood. Already competent on keyboard and violin, he composed from the age five and performed before European royalty.
At seventeen he was engaged as a court musician in Salzburg. Visiting Vienna in 1781 he was dismissed from his Salzburg position and chose to stay in the capital, where over the rest of life he achieved fame but little financial security. The final years in Vienna yielded many of his best-known symphonies, concertos, and operas e.g.” The Marriage of Figaro”, “Don Giovanni”, and the unfinished “Requiem”.
He was inspired in Baroque style, fugal passages in “ The Magic Flute” and Symphony No. 41 had a powerful Baroque style influence.
He was an influential and most popular composer of the Classical era. He composed over six hundred works of symphonic, chamber, piano, operatic and choral music.
Beethoven wrote his own early composition in the shadow of Mozart, of whom Joseph Haydn - Mozart’s friend- wrote that "posterity will not see such a talent again in 100 years “.
W. A. Mozart died in December 1791.
His musical talent was showed from his earliest childhood. Already competent on keyboard and violin, he composed from the age five and performed before European royalty.
At seventeen he was engaged as a court musician in Salzburg. Visiting Vienna in 1781 he was dismissed from his Salzburg position and chose to stay in the capital, where over the rest of life he achieved fame but little financial security. The final years in Vienna yielded many of his best-known symphonies, concertos, and operas e.g.” The Marriage of Figaro”, “Don Giovanni”, and the unfinished “Requiem”.
He was inspired in Baroque style, fugal passages in “ The Magic Flute” and Symphony No. 41 had a powerful Baroque style influence.
He was an influential and most popular composer of the Classical era. He composed over six hundred works of symphonic, chamber, piano, operatic and choral music.
Beethoven wrote his own early composition in the shadow of Mozart, of whom Joseph Haydn - Mozart’s friend- wrote that "posterity will not see such a talent again in 100 years “.
W. A. Mozart died in December 1791.
Jennifer Lopez she was born, in the Castle Hill section of the South Bronx on July 24,1969 . The middle of three musically inclined sister,Leslie, a homemaker and Lynda,an entertainment consultant for new york channel 11. Jennifer parents were born in Puerto Rico .Jennifer always dreamed of being a multi-tasking superstar.While Jennifer is of Puerto Rican descendent her partenal grandmother.Jennifer took singing and dancing lessons for age 5. She attended 12 years of catholic school, incluiding an all girl high school. She played softball and tennis in high school and was a gymnast.
After high school ,she briefly worked in a law office. During this time, she continued dance classes at night . At 18,she left home because her mother was scared by her dicision to purpose show business. With casting on, In
Color [1990]in 1990 .Her first major film was Gregory Navas My Family in 1995 and her career went into over drive when she portratyed slain Tejana singer Selena Quintanilla Perez in Selena in 1997.
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After high school ,she briefly worked in a law office. During this time, she continued dance classes at night . At 18,she left home because her mother was scared by her dicision to purpose show business. With casting on, In
Color [1990]in 1990 .Her first major film was Gregory Navas My Family in 1995 and her career went into over drive when she portratyed slain Tejana singer Selena Quintanilla Perez in Selena in 1997.
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Machael Joseph Jackson was born August 29, 1958 in Gary, Indiana,USA
His be came singer at age of eleven, his was one of seven brothers and sister, that be came a group call Jackson 5.His began his solo career in
1971, his been came a” King of pop” his got a few songs that made everyone
Know his (TRILLER, BAD, DANGEROUS and HI STORY).His popularized a number of complicated dance techniques like the robot and moonwalk.
Now Jackson help lots of charity that made his image looking good in the media.
But his got other significant controversy and damaging his public image,hi was accused of child abuse in 1993,his not charged
Jackson starts have health concerns since early 1990.Jackson married twice and fathered of three children. In 2005 Jackson was tried and acquitted of sexual abuse allegations and others charges.
But MICHAEL JACKSON was the “KING OF POP”
His been inducted into the “Rock and Roll Hall of fame” twice, his win 13
Grammy and sale of 750 millions cops worldwide
Jackson was a successful career his part of popular culture for amost four decades.
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His be came singer at age of eleven, his was one of seven brothers and sister, that be came a group call Jackson 5.His began his solo career in
1971, his been came a” King of pop” his got a few songs that made everyone
Know his (TRILLER, BAD, DANGEROUS and HI STORY).His popularized a number of complicated dance techniques like the robot and moonwalk.
Now Jackson help lots of charity that made his image looking good in the media.
But his got other significant controversy and damaging his public image,hi was accused of child abuse in 1993,his not charged
Jackson starts have health concerns since early 1990.Jackson married twice and fathered of three children. In 2005 Jackson was tried and acquitted of sexual abuse allegations and others charges.
But MICHAEL JACKSON was the “KING OF POP”
His been inducted into the “Rock and Roll Hall of fame” twice, his win 13
Grammy and sale of 750 millions cops worldwide
Jackson was a successful career his part of popular culture for amost four decades.
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In 2006 Alpha5.20 done his first album ‘’Vivre et mourrir a dakar’’ who was also a dvd.
Popularising the gangster African concept Alpha 5.20 sell some of these album and mix tape, at clingnancourt in paris where everybody can go see him have a quick talk even ask for a featuring etc… he is selling a lot of cd over there and that not his only one place to sell his cd he is also selling in big organisation like fnac,virgin.
He is the creator of the groupe Ghetto Fabulous Gang with ‘’Holocost’’ with Shone and K.E.R(93-Clichy-sous-bois-Quartier la Forestiere),Balasatik Dogg (93-Montfermeil-Quartier des Bosquets) and also O’rosko(77-Meaux-Quartier Pierre Collinet), and he has done a lot of featuring with Malik Bledoss VF Gang C4 EX (Shayz et miko),Coroner (Nanou et Diro), Alpha Ayko,Face Gamba and Azod or also Genocid .
He has done a lot of video clip the biggest one is with Malik Bledoss and Mokobe ‘’on est venu ramasser ‘’in paroles d’escrocs album produce by Skaner.
Then in 2008 in june he has done Rakailles 4 ghetto cac 40 he sold more than 15 000 album and he also done the Rakailles4 dvd which is a big success like he has done with Vivre et mourrir a Dakar . He said that he his going to stop the rap and let place to the younger people but he didn’t quoted any date but before that he is going to sell some mix tape.
Alpha 5.20 has also participate in ‘’CRAME’’ this is a movie and he played a big scene in, but compare to the others rapper Alpha 5.20 never passed at Skyrock which is a big radio who pass every popular song because he said that he don’t need them to have a good career he can have a good career without them and they are cower because they played one of his instrumental without asked him in an interview he said ‘’here this is skyrock funerals!’’
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Popularising the gangster African concept Alpha 5.20 sell some of these album and mix tape, at clingnancourt in paris where everybody can go see him have a quick talk even ask for a featuring etc… he is selling a lot of cd over there and that not his only one place to sell his cd he is also selling in big organisation like fnac,virgin.
He is the creator of the groupe Ghetto Fabulous Gang with ‘’Holocost’’ with Shone and K.E.R(93-Clichy-sous-bois-Quartier la Forestiere),Balasatik Dogg (93-Montfermeil-Quartier des Bosquets) and also O’rosko(77-Meaux-Quartier Pierre Collinet), and he has done a lot of featuring with Malik Bledoss VF Gang C4 EX (Shayz et miko),Coroner (Nanou et Diro), Alpha Ayko,Face Gamba and Azod or also Genocid .
He has done a lot of video clip the biggest one is with Malik Bledoss and Mokobe ‘’on est venu ramasser ‘’in paroles d’escrocs album produce by Skaner.
Then in 2008 in june he has done Rakailles 4 ghetto cac 40 he sold more than 15 000 album and he also done the Rakailles4 dvd which is a big success like he has done with Vivre et mourrir a Dakar . He said that he his going to stop the rap and let place to the younger people but he didn’t quoted any date but before that he is going to sell some mix tape.
Alpha 5.20 has also participate in ‘’CRAME’’ this is a movie and he played a big scene in, but compare to the others rapper Alpha 5.20 never passed at Skyrock which is a big radio who pass every popular song because he said that he don’t need them to have a good career he can have a good career without them and they are cower because they played one of his instrumental without asked him in an interview he said ‘’here this is skyrock funerals!’’
Saliou
I am write to about Didier Drogba, He was bored 11 March in 1978 in Abidjan. He was currently play for Chelsea in the English premier league. As a young child he moved to France living with various family member. After in youth team, Drogba made his professional debut age 18 for Ligue 2 club Le Mans. Drogba came to prominence as one of the world formost striker in 2006 as he won the League title with Chelsea agained and captained the national. Team for the first time. He is really nice person and also he the most football player. He is very famous person in football player. And he is so happy person .
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About Jalal Talabani
Jalal Talabani was born in 1933 in the village of Kelkan near Lake Dokan in the South West of Kurdistan. In 1947 he decided to Join Kurdistan Democratic Party he decide go to Enters law school in the city of Koye .So after Goes into hiding in 1956 to escape arrest for founding the Kurdistan Student Union. To make organization to sporting a Kurdistan part name of Democratic part and after he made this decide Returns to law school,
While pursuing a career as a journalist and editor to serves in Iraqi army.
Leads resistance in key regions during Kurdish revolt in Kandil Mountain because it is a very big and a very high mountain it was a very useful for protecting he’s part and making a fight against the Baathist dictatorship Iraqi government. To get a freedom for Kurdistan. So he’s revolting was continuing until 5 of match 1991.Then Kurdish nation was made a very big operation against Iraqi government. After this Talal Talabani became Kurdish president. In 2005 he candidate himself by the Kurdish people to be Iraqi president so he is Iraqi president from then until now
Maria Sklodowska Curie was born in Warsaw in 1867 as the fifth and youngest child of Bronislawa Boguska and Wladyslaw Sklodowski . She lived in Warsaw until she was 24. When she was a little girl her nickname was Manya. When she was 16 she won a gold medal on completion of her secondary school in Russian lycée. When her father teacher of mathematics and physic had lost his savings through bad investment she had to take the work as a teacher. When she was 18 she was able to finance her sister medical studies in Paris, on the understanding that later her sister would help her to get an education.
In 1891 she went to study in Paris, where she obtained her higher degrees and started her scientific work. There she met some already known physicists- Jean Perrin, Charles Maurain and Aimé Cotton. She worked really hard into the night and virtually lived on bread, butter and tea.
In 1893 she began to work on Lippmann’s research laboratory.
She was marriage with Pierre Curie. It was a purely civil ceremony. Their marriage marked the start of partnership that was soon to achieve results of world significance, the discovery of polonium(so called by Maria in honour of Poland) in the summer of 1898 and the radium few months later.
She was the first person who get two Nobel prizes in different fields. In 1903 she get Nobel prize in physic and eight years later in chemistry. She also get Davy Medal(1903) and Matteucci Medal(1904).
She died in 1934 at the Sancellemoz sanatorium in Passy, was from aplastic anemia , almost certainly contacted form exposure to radiation. Her laboratory is preserved at the Musée Curie.
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In 1891 she went to study in Paris, where she obtained her higher degrees and started her scientific work. There she met some already known physicists- Jean Perrin, Charles Maurain and Aimé Cotton. She worked really hard into the night and virtually lived on bread, butter and tea.
In 1893 she began to work on Lippmann’s research laboratory.
She was marriage with Pierre Curie. It was a purely civil ceremony. Their marriage marked the start of partnership that was soon to achieve results of world significance, the discovery of polonium(so called by Maria in honour of Poland) in the summer of 1898 and the radium few months later.
She was the first person who get two Nobel prizes in different fields. In 1903 she get Nobel prize in physic and eight years later in chemistry. She also get Davy Medal(1903) and Matteucci Medal(1904).
She died in 1934 at the Sancellemoz sanatorium in Passy, was from aplastic anemia , almost certainly contacted form exposure to radiation. Her laboratory is preserved at the Musée Curie.
Agata
Mother Teresa
Mother Teresa was born in Macedonia in 1910. At the age of twelve, she felt strongly the call of God. At the age of eighteen she left her parental home and joined the Sisters of Loreto, an Irish community of nuns with missions in India.
After a few months' training in Dublin she was sent to India.
In 1950, Mother Teresa received permission to start her own order, "The Missionaries of Charity", whose primary task was to love and care for those persons nobody was prepared to look after. For over many years she ministered to the poor, sick, orphaned, and dying in the slums of Calcutta. She wished to spread what had been working so well in India to the rest of the world. At the time of her death it was operating 610 missions in 123 countries, including hospices, homes for people with hiv/aids, orphanages, soup kitchens and schools.
Mother Teresa’s work has been recognised throughout the word and she received a number of awards, including the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.
She died on September in 1997. Following her death she was beatified and given the title Blessed Teresa of Calcutta.
After a few months' training in Dublin she was sent to India.
In 1950, Mother Teresa received permission to start her own order, "The Missionaries of Charity", whose primary task was to love and care for those persons nobody was prepared to look after. For over many years she ministered to the poor, sick, orphaned, and dying in the slums of Calcutta. She wished to spread what had been working so well in India to the rest of the world. At the time of her death it was operating 610 missions in 123 countries, including hospices, homes for people with hiv/aids, orphanages, soup kitchens and schools.
Mother Teresa’s work has been recognised throughout the word and she received a number of awards, including the Nobel Peace Prize in 1979.
She died on September in 1997. Following her death she was beatified and given the title Blessed Teresa of Calcutta.
Desription of a famous person
****** BRAYAN ADAMS******
(Born Bryan Adams on November 5, 1959) is a Canadian rock singer_ songwriter and a photographer. Rollin Stone magazine describe Adam as having an unerring gift for Radio-friendly pop hooks “ . Hehas been nominated for several Grammy Award s ; and was first nominated at the 28th Grammy Awards for reckless and “ it’s only love “ and won Grammy and in 1992 won the award for “ best song written for a motion picture , TV and other Visual media . He has won countless junos in Canada ,MTV ASCAP . American music and lvor Novello awards . Hehas been awarded the order of Canada and the order of British Columbia for contributions to popular music and philanthropic work via his won foundation , Which helps improve for education for people around the world .Adams was inducted into Canada ‘s Walk of fame in 1998 and in April 2006 . He was inducted into the music hall Canada’s juno Awards He was nominated for his fifth Golden globe 2007 for songwriting on the film Bobby which was sung by Aretha Franklin and Mary J ,Blige . and has been nominated three times for Academy Awards for writing music in film .
NARIMAN ,,,,,,,,, MOJTABA
(Born Bryan Adams on November 5, 1959) is a Canadian rock singer_ songwriter and a photographer. Rollin Stone magazine describe Adam as having an unerring gift for Radio-friendly pop hooks “ . Hehas been nominated for several Grammy Award s ; and was first nominated at the 28th Grammy Awards for reckless and “ it’s only love “ and won Grammy and in 1992 won the award for “ best song written for a motion picture , TV and other Visual media . He has won countless junos in Canada ,MTV ASCAP . American music and lvor Novello awards . Hehas been awarded the order of Canada and the order of British Columbia for contributions to popular music and philanthropic work via his won foundation , Which helps improve for education for people around the world .Adams was inducted into Canada ‘s Walk of fame in 1998 and in April 2006 . He was inducted into the music hall Canada’s juno Awards He was nominated for his fifth Golden globe 2007 for songwriting on the film Bobby which was sung by Aretha Franklin and Mary J ,Blige . and has been nominated three times for Academy Awards for writing music in film .
NARIMAN ,,,,,,,,, MOJTABA
famous person
Thomas Edison inventor of electricity and the light bulb
Thomas Alva Edison was born on February 11, 1847 in Milan. Ohio, the seventh and the last child of Samuel and Nancy Edison.
Edison had a very little education as a child, attending school for a few months. He was good at writing, reading and arithmetic, but was always a very curious child and thought himself much by reading on his own. When he grow up he red a lot of scientific and technical books, and also had the opportunity at this time how to operate a telegraph.
The first great invention developed by Thomas Edison was the telegraph and after few years ago he invented electric light, but he did not ‘’invent’’ light bulb, improved upon a 50-year-old idea. The idea of electricity was not new, many people worked on that. Edison’s eventual achievement was inventing not just an electric lighting system that contained all the element necessary to make the light safe, practical and economical. After one and a half years ago the lamp burned for thirteen and a half hour.
Moreover, the invention of electricity had a consequence for the next few years when the world started to evolve.
Thomas Alva Edison was born on February 11, 1847 in Milan. Ohio, the seventh and the last child of Samuel and Nancy Edison.
Edison had a very little education as a child, attending school for a few months. He was good at writing, reading and arithmetic, but was always a very curious child and thought himself much by reading on his own. When he grow up he red a lot of scientific and technical books, and also had the opportunity at this time how to operate a telegraph.
The first great invention developed by Thomas Edison was the telegraph and after few years ago he invented electric light, but he did not ‘’invent’’ light bulb, improved upon a 50-year-old idea. The idea of electricity was not new, many people worked on that. Edison’s eventual achievement was inventing not just an electric lighting system that contained all the element necessary to make the light safe, practical and economical. After one and a half years ago the lamp burned for thirteen and a half hour.
Moreover, the invention of electricity had a consequence for the next few years when the world started to evolve.
Write a description of a person
Check out the link
http://www.dcsf.gov.uk/readwriteplus/bank.cfm?section=666
and open the pdf file.
Go to page 5.
Read the information.
How many paragraphs are there?
Complete activity C (on page 5)
Choose a famous person.....
Use the internet to find out interesting facts about them.
Decide which facts people would like to know about.
Write a description of about 150 words about this person
upload it onto the class blogg.
http://www.dcsf.gov.uk/readwriteplus/bank.cfm?section=666
and open the pdf file.
Go to page 5.
Read the information.
How many paragraphs are there?
Complete activity C (on page 5)
Choose a famous person.....
Use the internet to find out interesting facts about them.
Decide which facts people would like to know about.
Write a description of about 150 words about this person
upload it onto the class blogg.
Wednesday, April 15, 2009
new course
Hi Jane,
Thanks for your last letter and I'm really sorry I couldn't write earlier because I have so much to do. It was interesting to hear about school life in your home town. In your letter you asked me to tell you about my nearest visit to England. As you already known I'm planning to go to England to study and improve my English skills. I'm interested in doing a bilingual course for translation. It means that in the future I will be a translator.
I rang to the City College Plymouth for some details about this course and they let me know about it everything what I wanted to know besides location. I found out that bilingual course takes me one year and will give more opportunities for the future.
I need to have A-level from English, it's great because I have got one!
I don't know much about location. That reminds me you study in Plymouth and you know much more about this town than I know. Could you find out about room to let or flat. I'm thinking about living in a host family as well but I don't know if you have one in Plymouth.
I'd better get going. I can't wait our meeting.
See you soon,
Magda
Thanks for your last letter and I'm really sorry I couldn't write earlier because I have so much to do. It was interesting to hear about school life in your home town. In your letter you asked me to tell you about my nearest visit to England. As you already known I'm planning to go to England to study and improve my English skills. I'm interested in doing a bilingual course for translation. It means that in the future I will be a translator.
I rang to the City College Plymouth for some details about this course and they let me know about it everything what I wanted to know besides location. I found out that bilingual course takes me one year and will give more opportunities for the future.
I need to have A-level from English, it's great because I have got one!
I don't know much about location. That reminds me you study in Plymouth and you know much more about this town than I know. Could you find out about room to let or flat. I'm thinking about living in a host family as well but I don't know if you have one in Plymouth.
I'd better get going. I can't wait our meeting.
See you soon,
Magda
Friday, April 3, 2009
Hi Kate
Thanks for your letter. It was good to hear from you. I'm happy to hear that everything it's alright. Getting a letter from you is always important and very pleasent event. You know that I've always liked biology and science. I've decided to do some course.
I'm thinking about Human Biosciences or Sociology. However I don't know which to choose. On the Human Biosciences I can learn about cloning and gene therapy, but on the second course I can learn how to do social influences help to shape our lives and what is their relevance to prominent policy and professional debates of today. The best place to do this courses is in your city. Please let me know when you find something more about this courses. Perhaps you know somebody who is doing some of this courses and can tell me something about it? Could you do something for me? I have to find some place to stay in when I'll be study at the university.
That's reminds me, do you still have room to let? It will be great if I can live with you, because I don't want to live with somebody whom I didn't meet before. I'd better get going because a have a lot of work to do. Are you looking for some course to do? I remember that you wanted to be an actor?
Write soon
Agata
Thanks for your letter. It was good to hear from you. I'm happy to hear that everything it's alright. Getting a letter from you is always important and very pleasent event. You know that I've always liked biology and science. I've decided to do some course.
I'm thinking about Human Biosciences or Sociology. However I don't know which to choose. On the Human Biosciences I can learn about cloning and gene therapy, but on the second course I can learn how to do social influences help to shape our lives and what is their relevance to prominent policy and professional debates of today. The best place to do this courses is in your city. Please let me know when you find something more about this courses. Perhaps you know somebody who is doing some of this courses and can tell me something about it? Could you do something for me? I have to find some place to stay in when I'll be study at the university.
That's reminds me, do you still have room to let? It will be great if I can live with you, because I don't want to live with somebody whom I didn't meet before. I'd better get going because a have a lot of work to do. Are you looking for some course to do? I remember that you wanted to be an actor?
Write soon
Agata
gina
Hi Gina,
How are you doing !
Thank you for your last letter ,I am pleased you re interested about my future.
I am planning to start an Access Course in higher education .
Is it possible for me to do it in your college ?Because your college has a good reputation. Please let me know about the condition of enrolment ,the fee and every thing involved in the course.
As you know ,I ‘ll stay in your city until the end of class ,in fact I have to find a accommodations. Could you help me to find one ? I would to get the cheapest at the almost good condition.
Did you know that your college offer some accommodations in a cheap price ?
Could you ask the terms and conditions for me? Please answer me as soon as possible.
I ‘d better get going as I have to go shopping
Write soon ,Take care
Love xxxx
How are you doing !
Thank you for your last letter ,I am pleased you re interested about my future.
I am planning to start an Access Course in higher education .
Is it possible for me to do it in your college ?Because your college has a good reputation. Please let me know about the condition of enrolment ,the fee and every thing involved in the course.
As you know ,I ‘ll stay in your city until the end of class ,in fact I have to find a accommodations. Could you help me to find one ? I would to get the cheapest at the almost good condition.
Did you know that your college offer some accommodations in a cheap price ?
Could you ask the terms and conditions for me? Please answer me as soon as possible.
I ‘d better get going as I have to go shopping
Write soon ,Take care
Love xxxx
NAME: WILSA
NAME: WILSA
SCHOOL: COIMBRA COLLEGE
Dear Sara,
Thanks for your letter, and I would like to do childcare course. Could you do something for me?
I would like to know when the course will start and where the course will take place I could do the course but I would like do part-time course.
I think I will be pleasure to learn more about the children.
Did you know that I have children and I can do full time course.
Please let me know if I can do the part-time course.
I wait for your answer soon.
I’d better get going to my class.
Wilsa
SCHOOL: COIMBRA COLLEGE
Dear Sara,
Thanks for your letter, and I would like to do childcare course. Could you do something for me?
I would like to know when the course will start and where the course will take place I could do the course but I would like do part-time course.
I think I will be pleasure to learn more about the children.
Did you know that I have children and I can do full time course.
Please let me know if I can do the part-time course.
I wait for your answer soon.
I’d better get going to my class.
Wilsa
Adam
Hi Ahamed.
How are you? I’m alright. How is everything and your family? I’m really happy to heart about your letter. I’m really sad to you thank you so much you are coming to here. I would like to give you some good new I’m study English course at the City College. I didn’t start any course at the moment because my write and read very is difficult.
IN here they have got a lot of course. For example two year full time and three year party time. So for me the hairdressing course is very interesting if you want to because you can meet a lot of people and talk to them a lot of question. also it‘s very easy not hard job. I want to let you know when you
Start the course. And what qualification do you have?
Thank you I'd better get going.
Adam
How are you? I’m alright. How is everything and your family? I’m really happy to heart about your letter. I’m really sad to you thank you so much you are coming to here. I would like to give you some good new I’m study English course at the City College. I didn’t start any course at the moment because my write and read very is difficult.
IN here they have got a lot of course. For example two year full time and three year party time. So for me the hairdressing course is very interesting if you want to because you can meet a lot of people and talk to them a lot of question. also it‘s very easy not hard job. I want to let you know when you
Start the course. And what qualification do you have?
Thank you I'd better get going.
Adam
hi sister
Hi sister!
How are you? I’m ok. Thanks for your letter. I hope everything are going good so, I’m really pleased to come study in England as you know. I’m interesting to do IT course so, could you do something for me please? Get same details
about these thinks to makes me sure before my trip.
What qualification do I need to enter in and if it’s important to bring it with me or not. I would like to get a small room, how much does cost for renting and deposit. Can you clarify me about fees usual. Anyway I wanted you to get they contact number I’ll call then if that’s possible.
I’ d better get g oing! Great
How are you? I’m ok. Thanks for your letter. I hope everything are going good so, I’m really pleased to come study in England as you know. I’m interesting to do IT course so, could you do something for me please? Get same details
about these thinks to makes me sure before my trip.
What qualification do I need to enter in and if it’s important to bring it with me or not. I would like to get a small room, how much does cost for renting and deposit. Can you clarify me about fees usual. Anyway I wanted you to get they contact number I’ll call then if that’s possible.
I’ d better get g oing! Great
Saliouuu
Hi George
I am happy to hear that you ll help me to find a place in one of these college in the UK, actually I am really happy because is been such a long time I am searching for a college in the UK, and cheers for this letter you showed me that I can have your support if I want to come in the UK. Anyway now I am going to tell you more about this course.
I would like to start a computer technology course it’ll be better in London because there is a lot of little work which I think I’ll do if they can’t take me in this course as an apprentiship because I need money so do u think that there is some chance for me to start this course as an apprentiship course? I mean is there a lot of place for this kind of course? Oh I completely forgot did you know that in my country the course that I want to do is around 700euro for the year??! That expensive isn’t it?
I am really sorry that I didn’t call you this last three months but I hadn’t have the time for because I used to went a lot of times to my brother house coz he had a baby and I played the summer league why don’t you just come one day to see one of our match? Oh! That reminds me how is your shoulder? You must have a fit shoulder if u wants to continue your ligue1 as a goalkeeper! Anyway let me know if you’ll play a football match soon.
So are you still in contact with that girl Julie? I need to talk to her could you do something for me? Could you give her my number and tell her to call me so I’ll call her back. So homie I’d better get going I have to keep a baby.
I am happy to hear that you ll help me to find a place in one of these college in the UK, actually I am really happy because is been such a long time I am searching for a college in the UK, and cheers for this letter you showed me that I can have your support if I want to come in the UK. Anyway now I am going to tell you more about this course.
I would like to start a computer technology course it’ll be better in London because there is a lot of little work which I think I’ll do if they can’t take me in this course as an apprentiship because I need money so do u think that there is some chance for me to start this course as an apprentiship course? I mean is there a lot of place for this kind of course? Oh I completely forgot did you know that in my country the course that I want to do is around 700euro for the year??! That expensive isn’t it?
I am really sorry that I didn’t call you this last three months but I hadn’t have the time for because I used to went a lot of times to my brother house coz he had a baby and I played the summer league why don’t you just come one day to see one of our match? Oh! That reminds me how is your shoulder? You must have a fit shoulder if u wants to continue your ligue1 as a goalkeeper! Anyway let me know if you’ll play a football match soon.
So are you still in contact with that girl Julie? I need to talk to her could you do something for me? Could you give her my number and tell her to call me so I’ll call her back. So homie I’d better get going I have to keep a baby.
eva letter
Dear Monika,
Thanks for you letter, I’m happy to hear that you feel well.
In these days I would like to change something in my life. Just now
I finish the English lesson on Entry 3 in Plymouth City College, than
I would like to start the course Advances in High Education, because
I’II stay a couple of years in England that it will be better for me to
Work in my profession . I have worked as an accountant during last
29 years in Poland. Because of all of these I would like to study an
accountancy on Plymouth University.
The Advances course will take place in City Plymouth College in Goshen Centre. I have chose the part time course, because I work in the afternoons.
The course will be one year long, than after I would like to decide if I’m
Read to study or not yet.
That reminds me. What will you be doing
During the Easter? I’ll be in Warsaw next Tuesday in the late afternoon.
Why don’t we go for shopping and chat, next week in Warsaw.
Love, before signing the letter
Ewa
Thanks for you letter, I’m happy to hear that you feel well.
In these days I would like to change something in my life. Just now
I finish the English lesson on Entry 3 in Plymouth City College, than
I would like to start the course Advances in High Education, because
I’II stay a couple of years in England that it will be better for me to
Work in my profession . I have worked as an accountant during last
29 years in Poland. Because of all of these I would like to study an
accountancy on Plymouth University.
The Advances course will take place in City Plymouth College in Goshen Centre. I have chose the part time course, because I work in the afternoons.
The course will be one year long, than after I would like to decide if I’m
Read to study or not yet.
That reminds me. What will you be doing
During the Easter? I’ll be in Warsaw next Tuesday in the late afternoon.
Why don’t we go for shopping and chat, next week in Warsaw.
Love, before signing the letter
Ewa
New course
Dear my Sarah,
Thanks for your email and your help me with the course. Can you find best course about a actor in Paignton .I think my English is better. I have got now 8 certificate of Cambridge University. I looking course for full time because now I haven’t job my little problem is where I can stay? Maybe you have good friends but if you've got a better idea, let me know. I think I'll stay for a five months in a course. Did you know everything is expensive. Please let me know what I need and when is start.
Write soon
With Love
Nicol
Thanks for your email and your help me with the course. Can you find best course about a actor in Paignton .I think my English is better. I have got now 8 certificate of Cambridge University. I looking course for full time because now I haven’t job my little problem is where I can stay? Maybe you have good friends but if you've got a better idea, let me know. I think I'll stay for a five months in a course. Did you know everything is expensive. Please let me know what I need and when is start.
Write soon
With Love
Nicol
Mohamad ibrahim hassan
Hi Rebaz
How are you (doing)? How is everything going? I am happy to tell you about my course I've been planning this for a long time I want to take up a science classes in Portsmouth! What's cool is that I don't want to join a common class but a group of people that expresses itself through the science. I'd love to have your opinion about this course l choose. Just check the prices well and give me the schedule of each place.
I guess the best place to stay is getting a cheaper rented house but if you've got a better idea, let me know. I think I'll stay for six months; the problem is that I'm not sure if I can afford it. That’s one of the things. So you know Portsmouth city everything is so expensive! It'd be fantastic if you could search for the appropriate science classes in the city for me.
Ok, take care and see you soon!
Mohamad hassan
How are you (doing)? How is everything going? I am happy to tell you about my course I've been planning this for a long time I want to take up a science classes in Portsmouth! What's cool is that I don't want to join a common class but a group of people that expresses itself through the science. I'd love to have your opinion about this course l choose. Just check the prices well and give me the schedule of each place.
I guess the best place to stay is getting a cheaper rented house but if you've got a better idea, let me know. I think I'll stay for six months; the problem is that I'm not sure if I can afford it. That’s one of the things. So you know Portsmouth city everything is so expensive! It'd be fantastic if you could search for the appropriate science classes in the city for me.
Ok, take care and see you soon!
Mohamad hassan
New Course
Hi Claudia
Thanks for your email. As you already know I have decided come to England to study. I’m able stay there about one year. I’ll have opportunity to improve my English skills as well. And don’t be surprised what I have chosen. I would like doing floristry course. I love flowers and I think that will be pleasure to learn more about. I'm happy to hear that you can ring your friends to find out more what I’ll need. Please, let me know where the best place to some floristry course is?
That reminds me do you still have rooms to let, because I can be interested to stay in one. Could you do something for me? Could you rent me some cosy one in two months?
Write soon
Take care
Gosia
Thanks for your email. As you already know I have decided come to England to study. I’m able stay there about one year. I’ll have opportunity to improve my English skills as well. And don’t be surprised what I have chosen. I would like doing floristry course. I love flowers and I think that will be pleasure to learn more about. I'm happy to hear that you can ring your friends to find out more what I’ll need. Please, let me know where the best place to some floristry course is?
That reminds me do you still have rooms to let, because I can be interested to stay in one. Could you do something for me? Could you rent me some cosy one in two months?
Write soon
Take care
Gosia
Friday 3rd April 2009
Good morning. I hope you are ok.
This is the last class of thir term. Our first day back after the holiday is 20th April.
We are going to practice writing an informal letter/email today.
Try and use the phrases below.
1. That reminds me,... to change the subject
2. Why don't we... to suggest or invite
3. I'd better get going... to finish the letter
4. Thanks for your letter... to thank the person for writing
5. Please let me know... to ask for a response
6. I'm really sorry... to apologize
7. Love,…before signing the letter
8. Could you do something for me?... to ask a favor
9. Write soon... to ask for a reply
10. Did you know that… to share some information
11. I'm happy to hear that... to begin the letter
STEP 1
paste the link into your browser, and answer the question.
Use the model answer to help you.
http://www.flo-joe.co.uk/fce/students/writing/makeover/makeover7.htm
STEP 2
Remember to save the document as a word file
STEP 3
Publish the letter on the blog, and leave comments where you can.
STEP 4
Ask Jason for the questions to find out about Easter.
Use the link below to answer your question(s).
http://www.woodlands-junior.kent.sch.uk/customs/easter.html
Share your answers with the other students
STEP 5
We will go to our other room for a presentation on Easter.
This is the last class of thir term. Our first day back after the holiday is 20th April.
We are going to practice writing an informal letter/email today.
Try and use the phrases below.
1. That reminds me,... to change the subject
2. Why don't we... to suggest or invite
3. I'd better get going... to finish the letter
4. Thanks for your letter... to thank the person for writing
5. Please let me know... to ask for a response
6. I'm really sorry... to apologize
7. Love,…before signing the letter
8. Could you do something for me?... to ask a favor
9. Write soon... to ask for a reply
10. Did you know that… to share some information
11. I'm happy to hear that... to begin the letter
STEP 1
paste the link into your browser, and answer the question.
Use the model answer to help you.
http://www.flo-joe.co.uk/fce/students/writing/makeover/makeover7.htm
STEP 2
Remember to save the document as a word file
STEP 3
Publish the letter on the blog, and leave comments where you can.
STEP 4
Ask Jason for the questions to find out about Easter.
Use the link below to answer your question(s).
http://www.woodlands-junior.kent.sch.uk/customs/easter.html
Share your answers with the other students
STEP 5
We will go to our other room for a presentation on Easter.
Friday, March 27, 2009
Hello
1. I would like to do Accounting next year.
2. Because I am interesting in this and I am very good at working with numbers.
3. I went to the learning service they advice me about this course. I need to have a maths qualification and English too.
4. After 3 or 5 years I hope to get University to finish my study.
2. Because I am interesting in this and I am very good at working with numbers.
3. I went to the learning service they advice me about this course. I need to have a maths qualification and English too.
4. After 3 or 5 years I hope to get University to finish my study.
Gosia in future
Hi Jason
Thank for your e-mail. Yes, you’ve right, It's been such a long time....
You take so big decision about study architecture. Well done Jason. Its sounds very good but not too serious? A lot of work before you…
I have to tell you that as you I have long term plans for my future. First at all next year I would like to continue learning English at college. To improve my English as much as possible is for me the most important thing. Next I plan apply for different course more relevant what I did when working for 6 years in Poland. I am thinking about learning professional engineering programme AutoCad. I need that for work purpose, because I want get a job in future as a cad technician. Student Service was very helpful for me to find out more what choose, how to apply and etc.
So I am as excited as you. Amazing, you have remembered that I wanted to become a actress. But it was so long ago and as you see I have changed my plans.
Let me know when we can meet each other.
Hope to hear from you soon
Gosia
Thank for your e-mail. Yes, you’ve right, It's been such a long time....
You take so big decision about study architecture. Well done Jason. Its sounds very good but not too serious? A lot of work before you…
I have to tell you that as you I have long term plans for my future. First at all next year I would like to continue learning English at college. To improve my English as much as possible is for me the most important thing. Next I plan apply for different course more relevant what I did when working for 6 years in Poland. I am thinking about learning professional engineering programme AutoCad. I need that for work purpose, because I want get a job in future as a cad technician. Student Service was very helpful for me to find out more what choose, how to apply and etc.
So I am as excited as you. Amazing, you have remembered that I wanted to become a actress. But it was so long ago and as you see I have changed my plans.
Let me know when we can meet each other.
Hope to hear from you soon
Gosia
Hi ,
Thanks a lot for your email ,It was so great.
I'm sorry I haven't written to you earlier but I had to holiday. As you probably remember I've always wanted to visit you and maybe we can make barbecue. I’m so happy for you because you are in Foundation degree …I never heard of this school
When you have time maybe you can draw my new house I thing
you can be professional in your job you have big fantasy for that.
I’ve different school not an actor I want be in a office travel agency and help some people for the cruise or holiday. I looking best school for me
I study just one year in a city college now I’m in entry 3 I’m so happy in a class my teacher is great. We have exam recently. I hope maybe is little easy.
Have nice day and take care.
See you later
Nicol
Thanks a lot for your email ,It was so great.
I'm sorry I haven't written to you earlier but I had to holiday. As you probably remember I've always wanted to visit you and maybe we can make barbecue. I’m so happy for you because you are in Foundation degree …I never heard of this school
When you have time maybe you can draw my new house I thing
you can be professional in your job you have big fantasy for that.
I’ve different school not an actor I want be in a office travel agency and help some people for the cruise or holiday. I looking best school for me
I study just one year in a city college now I’m in entry 3 I’m so happy in a class my teacher is great. We have exam recently. I hope maybe is little easy.
Have nice day and take care.
See you later
Nicol
hello
Hi, Dina? How are you?
How about and your children? Do you still on this job now?
I am fine and my children too. I heard about Foundation degree and did last year on college. Next year I am going to do child care NVQ3 and I plan to finish NVQ3 and work in nursery with children.
I want to be a good support learner for children .The college is really good going and the teacher class are good .
So I have not take exams yet .I would like organise
for next weekend, see you next weekend.
wilsa
How about and your children? Do you still on this job now?
I am fine and my children too. I heard about Foundation degree and did last year on college. Next year I am going to do child care NVQ3 and I plan to finish NVQ3 and work in nursery with children.
I want to be a good support learner for children .The college is really good going and the teacher class are good .
So I have not take exams yet .I would like organise
for next weekend, see you next weekend.
wilsa
I'm right
I’m alright so thank you for your letter and it’ s for ages I never heard to you. So I’ m the some my life does change too.
Yes I heard about foundation degree, exactly.
So next year I’m gonna do Engineering in Electrical and to be able to finish this course to gain a certificate and work some where if that it gonna be possible.
No, not really. Yes a bit ok, no I have exam after 6 weeks.
I think when I’ll be completely free.
Yeah, yeah of course
OK, Thanks
Take care you too!
Me too
Bye!
Clarise miantezolo
Yes I heard about foundation degree, exactly.
So next year I’m gonna do Engineering in Electrical and to be able to finish this course to gain a certificate and work some where if that it gonna be possible.
No, not really. Yes a bit ok, no I have exam after 6 weeks.
I think when I’ll be completely free.
Yeah, yeah of course
OK, Thanks
Take care you too!
Me too
Bye!
Clarise miantezolo
Mr Hassan
Hi how are you?
I am really happy now about hearing your letter and change your life
It’s good to you to study at this college to be architecture in your future.
So next year l would like to continue study more about English course until l finishing this and speak English more better. the reason is because l am living in England and l have to study about English course and l would like to get a great qualification because l would like to study at university in my future that’s all my hobby in my life so l hope l could successes’ will talk to my teacher to find out more information about it and contact university to collection me for study there. this is my plans are for next 5 years l hope l am able to finishing my course at university and after that find out a good job for myself so at the same time make a family and spending a nice time with them.
That’s all my hope
I am really happy now about hearing your letter and change your life
It’s good to you to study at this college to be architecture in your future.
So next year l would like to continue study more about English course until l finishing this and speak English more better. the reason is because l am living in England and l have to study about English course and l would like to get a great qualification because l would like to study at university in my future that’s all my hobby in my life so l hope l could successes’ will talk to my teacher to find out more information about it and contact university to collection me for study there. this is my plans are for next 5 years l hope l am able to finishing my course at university and after that find out a good job for myself so at the same time make a family and spending a nice time with them.
That’s all my hope
Hi Jason
Thank you for your last letter. It was a nice surprise to hear from you.
I’ m really happy that you decided to enrol for this course at university. I know that will be a big change in your life, but now your dream can come true. I think you will be an amazing architect in the future.
I’ve never heard about Foundation degrees, but I will be read something about it. I’d heard that this is in our college, but I’ve never asked about it.
I’ve changed my plans and I don’t want to be an actor any more. I’ve decided to be a criminology, or scientist, because at school I’ve always liked science. I’m looking for some course at university, but at first I would like to pass an A level exam in Lipson Community College.
It’s my first year in City College Plymouth, but I’m really happy that I came here and decided to learn English in this college. We had an exam recently, but it wasn’t too difficult. I hope that reading and writing exam will be easy too.
I hope that we will see each other next Monday at school.
Have a nice weekend and take care.
See you soon
Agata
Thank you for your last letter. It was a nice surprise to hear from you.
I’ m really happy that you decided to enrol for this course at university. I know that will be a big change in your life, but now your dream can come true. I think you will be an amazing architect in the future.
I’ve never heard about Foundation degrees, but I will be read something about it. I’d heard that this is in our college, but I’ve never asked about it.
I’ve changed my plans and I don’t want to be an actor any more. I’ve decided to be a criminology, or scientist, because at school I’ve always liked science. I’m looking for some course at university, but at first I would like to pass an A level exam in Lipson Community College.
It’s my first year in City College Plymouth, but I’m really happy that I came here and decided to learn English in this college. We had an exam recently, but it wasn’t too difficult. I hope that reading and writing exam will be easy too.
I hope that we will see each other next Monday at school.
Have a nice weekend and take care.
See you soon
Agata
old friends
What’s up!?
I have read your letter thank you to think about me I hope every things its alright over there, unfortunately my life had not changed since last this last 3 month I am still at college and YES! I passed my entry3 exams.
Actually my year at the college is going very well I met a lot new friends and I spent too much time to the gym lol, but unfortunately I did not find a job that’s why I am a little bit sad.
Anyway I am glad to see that you going to start a new course a new course next year I hope you will enjoy it, Your college looks very good because there is not foundation degree in my college which is really rubbish isn’t it?
Next year I will start an ICT course as I have always enjoyed it and I passed an interview on Tuesday and the staff told me that I will start this course next September.
Now about my long terms plan well I am a little bit confused because I hope I will still study ICT this next 5 years or I can do 3years of ICT and then go to a games and software course I will think about it.
In addition I cancelled my actor aims because I do not have enough money for.
I am available to see you next month because I have a basketball trip until the end of the month it will be a pleasure to see you the first weekend of the next week of course just give me a ring!
Catch u later Man!
I have read your letter thank you to think about me I hope every things its alright over there, unfortunately my life had not changed since last this last 3 month I am still at college and YES! I passed my entry3 exams.
Actually my year at the college is going very well I met a lot new friends and I spent too much time to the gym lol, but unfortunately I did not find a job that’s why I am a little bit sad.
Anyway I am glad to see that you going to start a new course a new course next year I hope you will enjoy it, Your college looks very good because there is not foundation degree in my college which is really rubbish isn’t it?
Next year I will start an ICT course as I have always enjoyed it and I passed an interview on Tuesday and the staff told me that I will start this course next September.
Now about my long terms plan well I am a little bit confused because I hope I will still study ICT this next 5 years or I can do 3years of ICT and then go to a games and software course I will think about it.
In addition I cancelled my actor aims because I do not have enough money for.
I am available to see you next month because I have a basketball trip until the end of the month it will be a pleasure to see you the first weekend of the next week of course just give me a ring!
Catch u later Man!
ONLY english
Hi Jason,
Thanks for your letter. It really nice to hear from you because you right, it’s been such a long time…
I think, you made such a great decision and I wish you all the best.
I have never heard about Foundation degrees. It’s a fantastic information, I’ll
try to find out more about them.
My plans haven’t changed. I study English at college. Next year I would like to continue to study English. I have passed listening and speaking exam recently, but, you know, I am not confident in speaking enough. So, I would like to improve my English a lot. I hope I will pass reading and writing Entry 3 exam in June as well.
And my long term plans? I would like to find a good job. It would be great if I could work in some medicine’s branch because, honestly, sometimes, I miss it. But, who knows ?
I hope we can see each other on Easter holiday again.
I give you a call soon.
Anyway…I have to go to cook a lunch for my big and always hungry family.
Take care
Sarka
Thanks for your letter. It really nice to hear from you because you right, it’s been such a long time…
I think, you made such a great decision and I wish you all the best.
I have never heard about Foundation degrees. It’s a fantastic information, I’ll
try to find out more about them.
My plans haven’t changed. I study English at college. Next year I would like to continue to study English. I have passed listening and speaking exam recently, but, you know, I am not confident in speaking enough. So, I would like to improve my English a lot. I hope I will pass reading and writing Entry 3 exam in June as well.
And my long term plans? I would like to find a good job. It would be great if I could work in some medicine’s branch because, honestly, sometimes, I miss it. But, who knows ?
I hope we can see each other on Easter holiday again.
I give you a call soon.
Anyway…I have to go to cook a lunch for my big and always hungry family.
Take care
Sarka
Hi, how are you?
I would like to thank you for your letter it’s very interesting. I didn’t know what Foundation degree mean but thanks to you I found out about that everything.
So there are some Foundation degrees courses at my college but I didn’t find anything interesting for me. I think that is good idea to start this kind of course because it’s much easier learning and after that you have good qualifications. Really it’s good for you study Foundation degree in Architecture.
Next year I would like to continue my English course and at the same time start French course. It’s gone be hard but I have to try, what do you think about that?
Now I don’t want to be an actor (it was long time ago don’t you remember that?) in the future I will be an interpreter.
When it comes to long term plans I don’t know exactly what I will be doing but if everything will be all right and I will pass every exams which I need then I will go to study at University here or in Poland.
I don’t want to bore you …we should organise a weekend then we talk about our future plans.
I hope you will write to me soon.
Bye.
Magda
I would like to thank you for your letter it’s very interesting. I didn’t know what Foundation degree mean but thanks to you I found out about that everything.
So there are some Foundation degrees courses at my college but I didn’t find anything interesting for me. I think that is good idea to start this kind of course because it’s much easier learning and after that you have good qualifications. Really it’s good for you study Foundation degree in Architecture.
Next year I would like to continue my English course and at the same time start French course. It’s gone be hard but I have to try, what do you think about that?
Now I don’t want to be an actor (it was long time ago don’t you remember that?) in the future I will be an interpreter.
When it comes to long term plans I don’t know exactly what I will be doing but if everything will be all right and I will pass every exams which I need then I will go to study at University here or in Poland.
I don’t want to bore you …we should organise a weekend then we talk about our future plans.
I hope you will write to me soon.
Bye.
Magda
Hi
Hi, how are you doing? It ‘s a great pleasure to hear from you .
I’m so happy that you find a course at your college ,I hope you will get the qualification due.
About me , I’m still doing my English course , I am in entry 3 class now I hope I will improve my English.
I thing next year I will carry on with my English class, and the following year I will apply for a business course like accounting or a administration course .the course length is just for two years. After that I hope I will find get a better job, because I will gain qualification and experience.
I don’t want be a actor any more, I need same thing more interesting.
About the College is still the same , same programmes, same teachers nothing has changed
We had exams last February and we will get another in June.
We shall see each other in July during my trip in
Take care, see you soon.
futuro plans
Hello Anna
How are you? I want to let you know about my future plans for next year
Maybe I start work part time; I want to start my NVQ again at work place
And keep going to English class.
I want to find a better job and improve my English.
I try to find some information by internet, on my college and at the job centre.
So I haven’t got any long term plans, because the things change all the time.
Now I only want to enjoy my children, plan my holiday to see you and your family.
love gis
What are you up to?
Hi, how are you? It's been such a long time....
Anyway my life has really changed. I have decided to take a course at university....It's a big decision, but I have always wanted to study architecture.
It's going to be tough, but I'm going to study for another year at college, you know the one in London, down Peter Street. I hope my English with improve alot, and then I am going to take a Foundation degree in Architecture. Have you heard about Foundation degrees? They are amazing, you dont need very high entry qualifications....do they do then at your college?
So I am so excited....I can't wait. What are you going to do next year? What are you long term plans? Do you still want to be an actor? And how is college going this year? Didn't you have exams recently?
When are we going to see each other again? It was so much fun last time.
Shall we organise a weekend together?
Anyway....I have to go to work now....
Take care
Hope to hear from you soon
Jason
Monday, March 23, 2009
No 36 Bus Complaint
ESOL Entry 3 Clas3
C/O Jason Searing
ESOL Department
PL1 5QG
Milehouse Plymouth
PL3 4AA
Dear Sir or Madam
We are writing to complain about the poor service of the no.36 bus service which goes to City College Plymouth.
Firstly, we are very disappointed because the service you provide is not sufficient. The bus which goes to
We would like you to consider the effectiveness of the service and your choice of driver.
We are looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
ESOL Entry 3 Class,
No 42 Bus complaint
EWA, ROBERT
PL35OJ
Dear Sir or Madam
We are writing to complain about the No.42 bus service
Firstly, the bus always comes too late and is very crowded.
For example, I was waiting an half hour for the bus,
When it arrived it was too full and the driver did not stop.
Finally, I was late for my job this day.
I expect your company to arrange extra buses for this route.
I hope that this situation will never happen again.
Yours faithfully
Ewa Robert
Shoes Complaint
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to complain about the shoes I bought in your shop.
Two weeks ago I used your website and I bought a pair of shoes. Firstly, I received my order one week late. In addition the size and the colour were not right. I ordered a size eight, but I received a (size) six , and you sent me brown instead of black. This is not acceptable. Finally, the shoes were too small and I could not wear them.
I would like you to send me the right size and the right colour or a full refund .
Yours faithfully
Gosia and Joelle.
Gym Complaint
Dear Sir or Madam.
We are writing to complain about the gym in your college.
Firstly, we registered in your gym and we paid the membership which was £20 for the year. After that we saw that the opening hours of your gym were often wrong. This was because we followed the open hours of the gym and it was closed at these times. So we had to pay for another gym which was £50 weekly and we used it for a month.
In addition some machines in the gym were worn out and unavailable to use.
Finally, we wasted a lot of time waiting outside the gym door but we could not use the gym.
We would like you to give us a full refund.
Yours faithfully
Mohamad and saliou mojataba
Hot Point Complaint
PL1 5AE
Keyham
PL5 5AR
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about your delivery service.
I ordered a Hot point washing machine from your company. Firstly we agreed a delivery date on the 10th of March.
I stayed in all day but the delivery never arrived, addition I rang your company to know what happen but nobody provided a suitable answer. I am very unhappy with your company’s service.
Finally I could not stay in all day at home, so I would like a full refund.
I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully
Wilsa and Sarka's Letter of Complaint
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the dress which I bought from your internet website.
Firstly, I ordered a size 12 and you sent me a size 16. In addition , I wanted a black dress and you sent me a red one. Finally, your delivery service was really bad, because I paid £10 for the next day delivery and you delivered this item 2 days later.
I will send the dress back because of the wrong size and colour.
I would like to get my money back and I also expect a full refund for the postage paid.
Yours faithfully
Wilsa and Sarka
A J Letter of Complaint
Mutley Plain
PL46QY
Mr Reynolds
9 Hollyrood place
PL5 GR7
Dear Mr Reynolds,
I am writing to complain about your delivery service.
I ordered a sofa from your company and agreed a delivery date of 15th March.
I took a morning off work to wait for the delivery, but it did not come.
At
It is not possible for me to take time off work again, so I would like to have the delivery next Saturday morning.
Please can you contact me about this immediately. My contact number is 07776586691.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Angelina Jolie {Clarise and Nicol}
Friday, March 20, 2009
Monday, March 16, 2009
Complaint
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complaint about journey which we made on the 1st of July.
We travelled by train from
which we booked, was locked after
I would like a compensation for these problems and I expect a full refund.
Your faithfully
Ming Ziay
Complaint
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about train journey which we have on 1st the July.
We were waiting for train from
We would like compensation for the problem we had as a result of the very poor service.
Yours faithfully,
Nikol, Arman and Agata
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to make a complain about your poor service on12/02/2009.
firstly the train left
in addition we had a delayed in
finally the train arrived in
for that my booking in the hotel has been cancellled because i arrived after midnigt
i had to find another hotel in this night which was expensive
I would you to give me a compensation for the disastre you created on my journey.
yours faithfully
Adam and Joelle
Complaint
Dear Sir or Madame
We are writing to complain about the train journey which we made on 1st. July.
We bought train tickets from
We would like compensation for the problems we had as a result the very poor train service.
Yours faithfully
Gislaine, Wilsa, Gosia
Fairtrade
I have always looked on this from the top,
I have never believed this stuff,
But my teacher opens my eyes
On ways of life, now I know
How can I help every single day
This poem is from our hearts,
LISTEN!
I slide the door and smell beautiful fragrance of something
I couldn’t believe
And say ‘’ What is that?’’
Fruits ‘’Fairtrade’’ he said.
You have to try
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